After
reading the argument essay against whether or not Arizona State University
should make all books offered electronically or not, I can say that I do agree
with this argument. For the most part everything that us students do is online,
when it comes to schoolwork, everything is turned in, and completed online, so
why aren’t more books offered online? When it comes to purchasing books I don’t
think anyone will say it is their favorite thing to do, especially when a
single book sometimes over $100.00. With more online books being offered it
will cut down the cost that us students have to pay because online books are
relatively cheaper than regular hard copy books. Another great point that was
brought up was that the upcoming generations are used to learning
electronically. In elementary schools now children are learning on iPad’s and
Kindles, so when these children come to college they will be expecting to use
mostly all things electronically. The reason why we are so used to using these
hard cover books is because it is what we all grew up with. Something that
could’ve been added to the argument is that students now a days are more
interested in reading online than reading out of a hard cover book. It is the
fact that most students time is consumed with being on the Internet or computer
anyway that it’ll make reading that much easier for them being that they’re
already on their computers. The
resistant audiences for this argument are people who are not technology savvy,
or people who cannot afford to purchase a computer or a tablet so they have to
sick to the old fashioned way of learning and read out of a hard cover book. The
author of the essay does appeal to these aspects of pathos in both situations.
For those who are not technology savvy, it was said that books could be offered
not only all online but there also could be hard books for those who prefer
that instead. This is a great option it is the best of both worlds, if student
enjoy hard covers it is still available, but if students want a less expensive
online version of that book, that is still an option as well. As for those who
cannot afford expensive computers and tablets it was said that the university
could supply the technology for them. Of course it would not be free, but the
charges could just go towards their tuition or be charged on their student
account. I would give the authors “ethos” a low rating only because I felt as
if nothing really appealed to emotion, everything was pretty logical. I believe
this is a good model for our proposal argument because it states his argument,
and then states why he believes this is beneficial to students, gives the
opposing viewpoint but also styed on topic all throughout the writing. In the
essay it uses statistics as evidence. The author could’ve researched online in databases
to get more research information.
Brittany Hughes English 102 Blog
Monday, February 11, 2013
Thursday, January 31, 2013
Blog Entry #6
Blog Entry #5 discussed how technology is becoming so
advanced that sooner than later Americans could potentially be out of jobs
being that this incredible machinery will take over and there will be no need
for human help anymore. If this were to occur many Americans would be out of
jobs and the economy could be at an all time low. Some people may say this is a
good thing, while others think differently. There are some possible
alternatives that could be put into place so this does not happen. It is strange
how technology is advancing so fast that we have come to this, why can’t
technology just slow down or stop completely? There comes a point where enough
is enough and I’m sure we have come to that point technology can be slowed
down, it can be stopped so why doesn’t that just happen? Americans shouldn’t be
worried about losing their jobs, not because they aren’t qualified enough but
because technology is taking their spot. Better yet, technology should be
produced to “help” these employees rather than take over their jobs completely.
Technology can be made that would make the lives of these employees more
simpler while still being on the job. There are many different ways to improve
technology without have the country at risk for an economic downfall, forcing
these Americans to be jobless. We need to ask ourselves what is more important,
having Americans employed or having technology so advanced that it’ll do the
job for us?
Blog Entry #5
This topic has been talked about for many years now, and the
same questions have been asked, but the most concerning question to everyone is
what would we do if technology became to advanced that certain job positions
were no longer needed? This is a concern that many people have, as they should.
With technology rapidly progressing this is really could potentially happen and
many Americans across the nation, along with other countries could be in danger
of losing their jobs. For example, doctors and construction workers are always
in high demand, if certain machinery and robots were to take over these jobs,
millions would be out of a job and not only is that bad for the people losing
their jobs, but it is terrible for the economy. Many Americans would be out of
jobs being that they have been replaced and they would have nowhere to go. The
government will have to make more jobs for all of these Americans getting the
boot. Looking at it right now, there are not that many more jobs he government
could make to employee these Americans that will be losing their jobs. If
anything they just shouldn’t make technology so advanced if there are this many
consequences in doing so. The only people this would benefit are the engineers
making all of this high tech technology. They would spend so much time improving this
technology and they are probably getting paid a high amount to do so. In the
end, having technology so advanced can potentially be a negative thing.
Tuesday, January 15, 2013
Blog Entry #2
Brittany Hughes
1/15/13
Carol
O’Shea
After
reading “The Connection Between Faith and Politics”, it is obvious that Barak
Obama has used some rhetorical strategies throughout the entire text. One
obvious rhetorical strategy that Obama used while writing the text was “Using
Emotions to Sustain an Argument”. Any reader reading this passage can come to
the conclusion that Obama is upset because faith and religion is being brought
up during the election in a negative way. Obama states, “No matter how
religious they may or may not be, people are tired of seeing faith used as a
tool of attack. They don't want faith used to belittle or to divide”. This not
only shows how Obama is upset about faith being used in a negative, but he also
speaks for everyone else. Another Rhetorical strategy that was used was, “Using
Emotion to Build Bridges”, this rhetorical strategy uses emotions to connect
with the readers letting them know that you understand their experiences. Mr.
Obama does this well by stating that he at first was not a true Christian. That
he had to overcome some obstacles to get to where he is when it comes to his
faith. “Christians who I worked with recognized themselves in me. They saw that
I knew their Book and that I shared their values and sang their songs. But they
sensed that a part of me that remained removed, detached, that I was an
observer in their midst.” Although Obama was uncertain about his faith, sooner
than later he found out where he belonged in the church. One rhetorical strategy
that wasn’t used wisely was “Coming Clean about Motives”. Some questions could
be aroused from this article questioning his motives. Obama doesn’t state
whether or not he has specific motives, and he also does not come clean about
not having any.
Monday, January 14, 2013
Blog Entry #1
Brittany
Hughes
Carol
O’Shea
1/15/13
Like many
Americans today, Barack Obama was at first not a dedicated Christian. He had is
doubts in the religion and did not want to go to church just to say that he
went. After realizing that if he did not become apart of a stronger power a
part of him would always be detached and missing. By attending church it did not answer all of
his unanswered questions, but in fact it did give Mr. Obama faith, something he
had not had in awhile. While he ran for the Senate of Illinois Mr. Obamas faith
was questioned. Mr. Keyes, Mr. Obamas opponent at the time questioned whether
or not Obama was a true Christian being that he believed in certain life styles
such as gay marriage, and that Mr. Obama believed in pro-choice when it came to
women’s rights. Mr. Keyes did this to persuade people not to vote for Obama in
the election, and did not succeed. Mr. Obama stated, “People are tired of
seeing faith used as a tool of attack”, not everyone is going to have the exact
same religious views and that is okay. Mr. Obama goes into detail about just
because he does believe in pro-choice and gay marriage that does not mean that
he is not Christian. Many conservative politicians blame their non-beliefs on
their religion, but that doesn’t get the point across to everyone else who is
of a different religion, or who is a non-believer all together. Instead of
being prejudice towards each other just because someone does not have the same
beliefs as one another, we should look further into it and see what
similarities each other has and make it into a more positive experience for the
Americans.
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